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SOME THOUGHTS

发表于 : 周四 11月 28, 2013 12:42 pm
欧剑港
As the following article is written for confessing my sins, I prefer to write it in English, but not Chinese. So I beg for your forgiveness if you could not understand what I have written.

It is well known that the CEE(College Entrance Examination) is one of the most important event to all of us. Thus, everybody, especially those who are eager to change the fate of the poor, would try his best to study, so do I.

Besides, it is probably because I grew up in such an environment, I always intensively dream of becoming a knowledgeable and wealthy person, and want to help others in need. Even had I hoped that the song like Declan Galbraith's Tell Me Why would never appear again though I love it.

To sum up, I believe I was a good student in high school.

However, I, in college, had almost forggotten what my former dream is.That I was so ridiculous that I had wasted most of my precious time on going to play everywhere and playing computer games, and even wasted it for nothing. I think it a shame of me, then I often intend to improve my self-control, but I would always unconsciously do something as usual, and I do not know what to do.

Fortunately, on the gathering at Panyu, Guangzhou City, I had heard something authentic that shocked me and reminded me of my responsibility. After hearing our uncles' words, I realized that they are doing a great event, of which they give others help but ask for nothing in return, and that our stars' performance will deeply related with the future of twinkle-stars. I felt so sorry and guilty for what I did in the last three months.

Therefore, I made up my mind to get my enthusiasm of studying back from then on, and made a promise to be a useful man. Not only should I acquire knowledge, but also I have to enhance other practical skills in college.

Right now, I believe that I have made progress in terms of self-control, for I would spend more time in doing something valuable.

So as to guarantee that I will keep on performing well, I need more pressure from outside, you in particular. So I will appreciate it if you could give me some simple inquiry or small request. Such as, "Are you study hard recently? " Or "Spend ten minutes more on improving your oral English ". Just move on, every stars and parents of stars!

Welcome to write down what you want!

Re: SOME THOUGHTS

发表于 : 周五 11月 29, 2013 12:01 pm
欧剑港
文章已经经过修改,但仍有不足,仍是一篇中式英文,阅读起来可能比较吃力,希望大家谅解哦。 :D

Re: SOME THOUGHTS

发表于 : 周一 12月 02, 2013 12:35 pm
Raymond Kam
Build up the Spirit of Stars.

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发表于 : 周三 12月 04, 2013 5:23 pm
欧剑港
Thanks for your encouragement Uncle Raymond.I don't accurately konw what spirit of stars is, though, I can feel that she can be diligence,confidence,selfless,self-control,unit and fraternity,etc.Cut off all means of retreat,and I believe I will make every effort to build it up. ;)

Re: SOME THOUGHTS

发表于 : 周三 12月 04, 2013 7:07 pm
Raymond Kam
One of the Spirit you missed is to GIVE.

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发表于 : 周六 12月 07, 2013 6:15 pm
欧剑港
Yes,it's right. How considerate you are, Uncle Raymond! Thank you for your reminding. :D

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发表于 : 周四 2月 13, 2014 3:08 pm
梁復基
Stay in the library more. It is the treasure house of every university. You learn a lot more there than in the lecture room. We don't play computer games there, do we?

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发表于 : 周四 3月 06, 2014 6:41 pm
寂静的风
It's good to form the habit of writing essays or your diaries in English, that would help make progress in English studying. So keep going! My teacher told me that nonsense is better than silence. Don't be afraid of making mistakes.

Re: SOME THOUGHTS

发表于 : 周三 3月 26, 2014 11:12 pm
欧剑港
Re: SOME THOUGHTS
由 Liang Fu Ji » 週四 2月 13, 2014 3:08 pm

Stay in the library more. It is the treasure house of every university. You learn a lot more there than in the lecture room. We don't play computer games there, do we?
Liang Fu Ji
 
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註冊時間: 週日 8月 18, 2013 2:44 pm

No,we don't! And I did as you said after I noticed your suggestion,but it had little effect at the beginning.Whereas, I found it work to extricate myself from wallow in computer games after going to library for several times. :P

Re: SOME THOUGHTS

发表于 : 周三 3月 26, 2014 11:39 pm
欧剑港
="寂静的风"]It's good to form the habit of writing essays or your diaries in English, that would help make progress in English studying. So keep going! My teacher told me that nonsense is better than silence. Don't be afraid of making mistakes.[/quote]

Thanks, I am gradually getting it. I will more prefer to make mistakes than be afraid of doing something I am uncertain.:D O